Ass Doctor by James Aaron and Rhonda Knotty - Series, Comedy, South Park Spec - Kim Kardashian comes to South Park to see their world renowned "Ass Doctor" 26 pages - pdf, format 8)

Oh dear. I enjoyed this. I need therapy ... stat!!

I'm a 60 year old man who enjoys South Park (maybe I'll post a picture of myself in my south park pajamas). You hit all the right SP memes square in the nuts. Good job.

Hi,

You have an error in the very beginning. A TV is not a voive over. Also, we wouldn't know there is a tv in the room because you failed to supply an action line showing the tv in the room. Who's voice is it from the tv.? Male or female? Old or young?

I enjoyed the pun at Hillary Clinton,  but unsure what any of this means.

Ok, im stopping at the extremely tasteless humor on pg 6.

Gl with the script

Tony

I'm out at page 2. I actually got around the poor formatting. It's the repetitive jokes re Randy not being let into his wife's ass that pulled me out. Once was enough. I got more of a sitcom vibe from this than South Park.