The God Whistle by Mark Kees Miller - Sci Fi, Fantasy - A science-fiction film about a man that builds a computer that almost literally places the wrath of God upon him using a duplicate version of himself. 71 pages - pdf, format 8)

just started reading...some of the grammar is off, which is a little confusing for me. I think you're passionate about science fiction, and about telling your story..try not to make the dialogue and the description of whats happening so straightforward and explanatory. You wouldn't want to make your audience think you're trying to call them stupid now would you? :)

Logline is full of mistakes, which makes me know exactly what to expect in the script itself, which is a pass for me.

If you can't write a mistake free logline, you're not going to be able to write a script either.

I like the title a lot. Unfortunately, the above posters are correct about the errors. :( Bummer.