SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Horror / Creak and Shriek - Filmed
Posted by: Don, June 18th, 2018, 7:35pm
Creak and Shriek by Rob Herzog - Short, Horror - An eight-year-old boy struggles for answers when his horror sound effects record starts playing on its own in the middle of the night. 8 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Kirsten, June 22nd, 2018, 8:31pm; Reply: 1
Hi Rob
I really enjoyed this, it's well written, you know how to write....I like its orginality and the sound effects help add to the atmosphere.
I loved the beginning image of him nose to the player.
Nice work, would be surprised if it didnt get picked up.
Cheers K
Posted by: stevemiles, June 30th, 2018, 4:41pm; Reply: 2
Rob,
Logline hooked me in and I wasn’t disappointed. Great little concept - simple to film to boot. It has that Tales From the Crypt feel to it - suitably creepy with a lot of the horror left to the imagination. Moves quick - maybe you could wring a little more tension from the build-up?
Regardless, I’d like to see this filmed - I’d be pretty certain it gets some interest.
Steve
Posted by: Philostrate, July 2nd, 2018, 2:25pm; Reply: 3
Hi Rob,
The logline is great and the script makes justice to it. It's screaming to be picked up.
I enjoyed it a lot, it's well written, has a creepy atmosphere and it's a good story, beginning to end.
Nice job! David
Posted by: Zack, July 6th, 2018, 1:41pm; Reply: 4
Hey Rob,
This is the second script of yours I've read, and it shares the same problems.
Before I give my thoughts, I'd like to make sure you are around to respond.
Zack
Posted by: Rob, October 18th, 2018, 8:58pm; Reply: 5
Creak and Shriek has been sold. Thank you to everyone who read it and posted comments. R.H.
Posted by: Kirsten, August 3rd, 2019, 6:02am; Reply: 6
Yay, I just saw this! Congrats.... has it been filmed? I would love to see it.
Posted by: Rob, August 3rd, 2019, 11:56am; Reply: 7
Available on Amazon - keywords Creak and Shriek film.
Posted by: eldave1, August 3rd, 2019, 7:37pm; Reply: 8
Congrats
Posted by: Kirsten, August 7th, 2019, 8:43pm; Reply: 9
Great! I'll look it up right now...
Posted by: Kirsten, August 7th, 2019, 8:55pm; Reply: 10
That was pretty dam good! :)
Posted by: Busy Little Bee, August 14th, 2019, 3:32pm; Reply: 11
It's always interesting to see from script to finished project... interesting, indeed
BLB.
Posted by: LiamX, September 18th, 2019, 4:12pm; Reply: 12
i enjoyed this one, thanks.
Posted by: Don, June 2nd, 2020, 11:42am; Reply: 13
Posted by: Yuvraj, June 2nd, 2020, 10:25pm; Reply: 14
Awesome short, bro.
Posted by: Zack, June 2nd, 2020, 10:48pm; Reply: 15
Congrats, Rob. :)
Posted by: jwent6688, June 6th, 2020, 8:15am; Reply: 16
This was nicely done. Effectively creepy. Just some advice, put "Short Horror Film" in your title on YouTube. The title is really the only thing the search engine works on and nobody's finding this film.