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Don
Posted: June 18th, 2018, 7:35pm Report to Moderator
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Creak and Shriek by Rob Herzog - Short, Horror - An eight-year-old boy struggles for answers when his horror sound effects record starts playing on its own in the middle of the night.  8 pages - pdf format

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Hi Rob

I really enjoyed this, it's well written, you know how to write....I like its orginality and the sound effects help add to the atmosphere.

I loved the beginning image of him nose to the player.

Nice work, would be surprised if it didnt get picked up.

Cheers K


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Rob,

Logline hooked me in and I wasn’t disappointed.  Great little concept - simple to film to boot.  It has that Tales From the Crypt feel to it - suitably creepy with a lot of the horror left to the imagination.  Moves quick - maybe you could wring a little more tension from the build-up?

Regardless, I’d like to see this filmed - I’d be pretty certain it gets some interest.

Steve


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Hi Rob,

The logline is great and the script makes justice to it. It's screaming to be picked up.

I enjoyed it a lot, it's well written, has a creepy atmosphere and it's a good story, beginning to end.

Nice job!
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Hey Rob,

This is the second script of yours I've read, and it shares the same problems.

Before I give my thoughts, I'd like to make sure you are around to respond.

Zack


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Creak and Shriek has been sold. Thank you to everyone who read it and posted comments. R.H.
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Yay, I just saw this! Congrats.... has it been filmed? I would love to see it.


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Available on Amazon - keywords Creak and Shriek film.
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Congrats


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Great! I'll look it up right now...


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That was pretty dam good!


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It's always interesting to see from script to finished project... interesting, indeed

BLB.


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i enjoyed this one, thanks.
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Awesome short, bro.


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