SimplyScript Fest by Dr. Draper - Don hosts a SimplyScripts film festival to showcase the overall winning script.  That has been filmed for us all to view. - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy, Comedy, Action

What the hell?  Where did this come from?  But I’m glad it did!  Had me laughing all the way through.  Surely this is written by he who shall not be named.

Plus I get to play the part of a toilet. Who knew I had it in me?

5 stars all across!

Well, this was creative. Lol

Should have added some more "Bro's" and "Dude's" to my dialog. :P I like my costume, though. ;D

Writing is a bit messy all the way through, but this is obviously a pisser so I'll let it slide.

Fun read. :)

I don't get a character?!?! No points for you

Quoted from Matthew Taylor I don't get a character?!?!

Me too! :B  :X

Some good dialogue.

Jeff seems to be a little disappointed at the moment, so why make him the stereotypical antagonist? I would've done the job as well.

This has only a Y/N possibility for criteria on the scoresheet.

Haha. Good bit of fun. Kinda makes me wish I’d entered!

Points deducted for not including a sewer or whistle.

Loved reading this!!! It is a joyful punt. Thanks

I always loved these SS scripts! Lots of fun. Wished it was a little longer.  ;D

This was funny and fun! Thanks. I liked my part, too. Some people might feel left out though. You should have included all the last contestants.

Quoted from eldave1 Points deducted for not including a sewer or whistle.

There was a whistle. Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first.

Quoted from khamanna Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first.

I'm not going to ask.

Quoted from DustinBowcot I'm not going to ask.

It's EXACTLY what you think it is. ;D

What's with that winner?!

"Image Problem" and "You Never Know What You'll Get" were robbed! ;)

Hi writer,

Quoted Text WARREN He better not. Rats of a Feather has got to win.

Well if you have to put words in my mouth :P

Quoted Text The title appears: 3 HAIL MARYS

Robbed!!! Damn you, Paul!!!

Quoted Text JEFF This is bullshit. I want to see the votes, now! He storms out stumping his feet.

Gave me a good chuckle.

Well that was fun. I've never been written into a script before.

I'm clearly going to have to give you a low score on story. You may have scored higher if I won, just saying :)

Thanks for that.

All the best.

Good stuff.

Highlight: Gary as a toilet. Looking a little flush.

I preferred Frasier Crane to Pinocchio, but, that's a nit.

Would have considered it perfect, if only it went 2 lines onto page 6.

;D Bravo, Writer!
Cracked me up first thing in the morning.

This would have won the Comedy round for me. Pity you missed the deadline.
I loved Warren telling me: Enough with me too.

A classic denouement too.
Loved it.

Kham dressed as Tinkerbell is an interesting visual. Activate Rooster!

Sorry, I'm a child.

A few errors that I have to look past because, well, this script was written in jest. If I took it seriously, I'd be an idiot... or, more of one.

Not sure this is sci-fi. Closer to horror.

Finally got round to actually reading this thing rather than just skimming through to see if I made the cut... I'm mentioned in dialogue so you get points from me again  ;)

Funny light-hearted read and a fitting end to the tournament.

Thank you writer

Hmmm... if I was included, I'd just be in the middle of the road. Just like all my entries.

Quoted from JEStaats Hmmm... if I was included, I'd just be in the middle of the road. Just like all my entries.

Not if you were dressed as Tinkerbell.

The Kevin character had quite an adventure. I'm jealous.

Quoted from khamanna This was funny and fun! Thanks. I liked my part, too. Some people might feel left out though. You should have included all the last contestants. There was a whistle. Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first.

Color me corrected

Hmmmmm