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 SimplyScript Fest - WT5 (currently 2068 views) |
| Don |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 9:42am |
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AdministratorAdministrator  So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts17839 Posts Per Day 1.97 |
SimplyScript Fest by Dr. Draper - Don hosts a SimplyScripts film festival to showcase the overall winning script. That has been filmed for us all to view. - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy, Comedy, Action |
| Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site.
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You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
- Wayne Gretzky
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| Gary in Houston |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 9:55am |
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Fellowship of the Four (week challenge)
LocationTexas Posts1496 Posts Per Day 0.32 |
What the hell? Where did this come from? But I’m glad it did! Had me laughing all the way through. Surely this is written by he who shall not be named.
Plus I get to play the part of a toilet. Who knew I had it in me?
5 stars all across! |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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| Zack |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 10:04am |
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Of The Ancients  You think this is a fuckin' costume?
LocationKentucky Posts5338 Posts Per Day 0.75 |
Well, this was creative. Lol Should have added some more "Bro's" and "Dude's" to my dialog.  I like my costume, though.  Writing is a bit messy all the way through, but this is obviously a pisser so I'll let it slide. Fun read.  |
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| Matthew Taylor |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 10:12am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts2006 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
I don't get a character?!?! No points for you |
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42.2
Two steps to writing a good screenplay:
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| PrussianMosby |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 10:34am |
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I don't get a character?!?! |
Me too!   Some good dialogue. Jeff seems to be a little disappointed at the moment, so why make him the stereotypical antagonist? I would've done the job as well. This has only a Y/N possibility for criteria on the scoresheet. |
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| SAC |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 10:41am |
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Of The Ancients 
LocationUpstate NY Posts3829 Posts Per Day 0.82 |
Haha. Good bit of fun. Kinda makes me wish I’d entered! |
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| eldave1 |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:02pm |
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Of The Ancients 
LocationSouthern California Posts6973 Posts Per Day 1.69 |
Points deducted for not including a sewer or whistle.
Loved reading this!!! It is a joyful punt. Thanks |
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| Grandma Bear |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:11pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts8300 Posts Per Day 1.28 |
I always loved these SS scripts! Lots of fun. Wished it was a little longer. |
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| khamanna |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:48pm |
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This was funny and fun! Thanks. I liked my part, too. Some people might feel left out though. You should have included all the last contestants.
Points deducted for not including a sewer or whistle.
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There was a whistle. Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first. |
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| DustinBowcot |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 2:35pm |
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Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first.
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I'm not going to ask. |
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| Zack |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 2:43pm |
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Of The Ancients You think this is a fuckin' costume?
LocationKentucky Posts5338 Posts Per Day 0.75 |
Quoted from DustinBowcot
I'm not going to ask.
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It's EXACTLY what you think it is. |
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| FrankM |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 2:47pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1446 Posts Per Day 0.50 |
What's with that winner?! "Image Problem" and "You Never Know What You'll Get" were robbed!  |
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| Warren |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 6:48pm |
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Of The Ancients  A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3890 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
Hi writer,
Quoted Text WARREN
He better not. Rats of a Feather
has got to win.
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Well if you have to put words in my mouth
Quoted Text The title appears: 3 HAIL MARYS |
Robbed!!! Damn you, Paul!!!
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JEFF
This is bullshit. I want to see
the votes, now!
He storms out stumping his feet.
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Gave me a good chuckle. Well that was fun. I've never been written into a script before. I'm clearly going to have to give you a low score on story. You may have scored higher if I won, just saying Thanks for that. All the best. |
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| PKCardinal |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 7:07pm |
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LocationKansas Posts1657 Posts Per Day 0.57 |
Good stuff.
Highlight: Gary as a toilet. Looking a little flush.
I preferred Frasier Crane to Pinocchio, but, that's a nit.
Would have considered it perfect, if only it went 2 lines onto page 6. |
| PaulKWrites.com
Ashes - Semi-contained psychological horror thriller/Feature
The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature
Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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| LC |
| Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 7:26pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts9071 Posts Per Day 1.45 |
Bravo, Writer! Cracked me up first thing in the morning. This would have won the Comedy round for me. Pity you missed the deadline. I loved Warren telling me: Enough with me too. A classic denouement too. Loved it. |
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