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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Drama Scripts / The Actor
Posted by: Don, April 3rd, 2020, 4:24pm
The Actor by Mpumelelo - Short, Drama - An audition becomes reality. 12 pages - pdf format
New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice :)
Posted by: oteb72, February 6th, 2024, 8:10pm; Reply: 1
Posted by: Grandma Bear, February 6th, 2024, 10:02pm; Reply: 2
Since there is no contact info on the cover page, if you are interested in the script, you can always contact Don, the webmaster, and ask him for a contact email. :)
Posted by: Stoneyscripts, February 7th, 2024, 2:25pm; Reply: 3
Hi there.
Great story bro. It didn't even matter about formatting or grammatical issues. I really enjoyed the narrative, language and interactions between your characters throughout. the nuances were spot on. Good luck with filming this one.
John Stone.
Posted by: LC, February 7th, 2024, 4:38pm; Reply: 4
Funny stuff, indeed!
Terrific characters and situation.
Formatting does need a thorough cleanup but I agree with John that the story carries this.
GIRL
(to Luke)
What do you need?
Luke, has no fuckin idea, whatsoever, as to what he needs.
ECU: ON LUKE
he's aware of the fact that he'll be in deep shit, should he
mention that he lied to Mazeven about being a nurse.
He thinks about what he needs,then.
LUKE
(mumbling)
Google.
;D
I hope the writer makes an appearance.
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