i posted my WIP here.

Love some reads for it, in exchange for feedback on something of your's similar in length (slightly short feature, or longer pilot length)

Not interested feedback about typos eg. - this is a second draft. Feedback requests are in the thread I linked, as well as the script.

I generally write a short essay of feedback for a spec alongside in-line comments on your script's PDF - so if you want feedback from me PLEASE provide a PDF copy.

Other users from the site can confirm my feedback style.

DM me or comment. Ca only really do one exchange at a time.