Off Limits by Bernard Antoine Mersier - Short, Drama, Mystery - A serial rapist has claimed his nineteenth victim, but that doesn’t stop Sydney from trying to find true love. When Russel, her coworker invites her on a date, she gladly accepts, blocking out the death of her first love. 11 pages - pdf format

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An enjoyable read Bernard. I really didn't see that denouement at all.

So hear are my thoughts:

Your screenplay format was concise and pleasantly easy to read through.

I just thought some of the dialogue was contrived.

Why don't you show us what happened to her boyfriend instead of telling us?

Both your characters were hilariously vile though.

Nice finish.