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Posted by: Don, July 17th, 2023, 7:42am
After relocating to a new city, a person with a strange addiction feels compelled to act when he/she discovers a sinister plot left behind by the co-worker they’ve been dating.

Writers' Choice Victor's Secret by Marnie Mitchell (mmmarnie) writing as Anonymous, too - Short, Drama - After relocating to a new city, a lawyer with a strange addiction feels compelled to act when he discovers a sinister plot left behind by the co-worker they’ve been dating. - pdf format

Writers' Choice In The Company Of Monsters by Gary  Kohatsu (Abe from LA) writing as Robin D. Graves - Short, Horror, Fantasy - A company man in charge of creating a horrifying product, must choose to expose or protect a worker with a sinister counter-plan. - pdf format

Sometimes It Stares Back by Anthony Cawood (AnthonyCawood) writing as Fred Nobody - Short, Drama - A puzzled addicted young woman finds an unlikely connection with her smart speaker, together they must crack the internet's toughest puzzle. - pdf format

I'm Not Chicken by Michael Godby (D.A. Banaszak) writing as That Guy Who Uses Febreze for Cologne - Short, Comedy - A Young man with a dangerous obsession becomes involved with an older woman with an unfortunately compatible fetish. - pdf format

Dark Passenger by Kathy Cranford (kcranford) writing as Yul B. Sari - Short, Drama, Crime - A man with a dark past grapples with his deadly compulsion. - pdf format

Bob's Big Break by Steven Dilworth (steven8) writing as PK Chesterton - Short, Romance, Horror - After relocating to a new city, a minor civil servant with a strange addiction feels compelled to act when he discovers a sinister plot left behind by the co-worker they’ve been dating. - pdf format

Poutine Hell by R5e (Gum) writing as Anonymous, three - Short, Comedy - An innocent Chad becomes the scapegoat for a crappy shenanigan. - pdf format

Chop Suey by Dawn Pisturino (dawnpisturino) writing as (c) 2023 - Short, Action - A chef from Chicago moves to San Francisco and gets embroiled in an FBI operation to take down the Chop Suey Tong, a dangerous smuggling ring. - pdf format

Her Red Reading by Michael Yu (MichaelYu) writing as anonymous - Short, Horror - A man is addicted to watching women reading. When he sees his girlfriend reading an evil book, he must stop her from killing an expert on studying ghosts. - pdf format

Stamp Machine by Roland. Jefferson (RolandJ) writing as Google Boy in Coompany Three - Short, Crime - The price of stamps continues to rise, especially when there's a woman who wants to deliver a very special message. - pdf format
Posted by: SAC, July 17th, 2023, 9:07am; Reply: 1
Well, here they are, gang! Thanks, Don, for posting them so quickly.

Very pleased with the turnout. 10 scripts for your reading pleasure. Not sure, but I hope the extra couple days were beneficial to some. I’m heading out to Myrtle Beach this week, but I’ll be checking in daily to read and keep up on the boards. Actually, call me crazy, but I timed it this way. Don’t ask. Or ask.

Remember, be respectful and constructive. These things ain’t easy to write.

Have at it!

Steve
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, July 18th, 2023, 4:51am; Reply: 2
That's my reading for this evening sorted out!
Posted by: kcranford, July 18th, 2023, 6:15pm; Reply: 3
I’m hoping to get most of these read soon. I’ve been locked in the hospital for days (no, not on a mental hold LOL - I work here). Anyway should have some free time soon to enjoy these and comment. Looking forward to some great shorts!
Posted by: mmmarnie, July 18th, 2023, 6:49pm; Reply: 4
Well I haven't written anything in quite a while and it shows in my entry. Glad to have at least finished something, even entered with 15 minutes to spare.  :P
Posted by: LC, July 18th, 2023, 7:06pm; Reply: 5
Great to see you, Marnie! :)
Posted by: mmmarnie, July 18th, 2023, 7:13pm; Reply: 6
Hi Libby!! Nice to see you too! And Pia, Anthony, Don, Steve, everyone!!  :)
Posted by: SAC, July 18th, 2023, 8:10pm; Reply: 7
Definitely good to see some familiar names back on the boards. You never know who’s gonna show up when an OWC hits.
Posted by: LC, July 18th, 2023, 8:44pm; Reply: 8

Quoted from kcranford
I’m hoping to get most of these read soon. I’ve been locked in the hospital for days (no, not on a mental hold LOL - I work here). Anyway should have some free time soon to enjoy these and comment. Looking forward to some great shorts!

;D
Posted by: Grandma Bear, July 18th, 2023, 8:44pm; Reply: 9

Quoted from SAC
Definitely good to see some familiar names back on the boards. You never know who’s gonna show up when an OWC hits.


Yes, they come out of the woodwork for those, lol! That's great. I did not submit anything though. Just reading and hoping I'm paying back some writers that have read my scripts.  :)
Posted by: Yuvraj, July 18th, 2023, 11:42pm; Reply: 10
Voted! Good luck to everyone!
Posted by: SAC, July 19th, 2023, 5:13am; Reply: 11
Thanks, Yuvraj!

Again, those who read them all but didn’t enter can request a voting ballot from either me or Don.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, July 19th, 2023, 6:59pm; Reply: 12
That's me reviewed em all and voted!

Another enjoyable OWC.

And hi Marnie!
Posted by: Gum, July 20th, 2023, 8:38am; Reply: 13
The deadline was pushed till Sunday, so I'm assuming the votes are due by this Sunday?

OK, update... I just saw Don's email asking if votes could be in by Friday, so kindly disregard.
Posted by: SAC, July 20th, 2023, 9:01am; Reply: 14

Quoted from Gum
The deadline was pushed till Sunday, so I'm assuming the votes are due by this Sunday?

OK, update... I just saw Don's email asking if votes could be in by Friday, so kindly disregard.


Yeah I was thinking that myself, seeing as I was late with the reveal, but I serve at the foot of the Don. Besides, everyone seems to be doing a good job of reading and reviewing so I’m thinking we’re probably a go for Friday votes due and a Saturday reveal.
Posted by: Don, July 20th, 2023, 9:10am; Reply: 15

Quoted from Gum
The deadline was pushed till Sunday, so I'm assuming the votes are due by this Sunday?

OK, update... I just saw Don's email asking if votes could be in by Friday, so kindly disregard.


I can wait until Sunday.  Or, once I get all the Writers' votes together.  Either works.  I serve Steve.  Whatever he wants. ..

- Don
Posted by: Gum, July 20th, 2023, 9:19am; Reply: 16

Quoted from SAC

… I serve at the foot of the Don.



Quoted from Don

I serve Steve.  Whatever he wants. ..


I thought I was confused before, but… but now I don’t know what the hell is going on!

Posted by: mmmarnie, July 20th, 2023, 1:21pm; Reply: 17
Read them all and voted. They were all entertaining in their own way, but for me there was one very clear standout.  ;D
Posted by: SAC, July 20th, 2023, 1:39pm; Reply: 18

Quoted from Don


I can wait until Sunday.  Or, once I get all the Writers' votes together.  Either works.  I serve Steve.  Whatever he wants. ..

- Don


Don’t threaten me with a good time!

But seriously, if there’s a need for extra time I suggest you shoot with me or Don an email saying so, that way we can figure out if more time is needed. Thanks!
Posted by: ghost and_ghostie gal, July 20th, 2023, 3:30pm; Reply: 19
A lot of good entries, some great peeps. We debated long and hard over the last two days on how to score some of 'em. In the end, we had to be fair.

All the best,

Reg
Posted by: SAC, July 22nd, 2023, 11:43am; Reply: 20
Hey all,

Please bear with me, I’m tallying the scores now and should have results up shortly.

Little teaser here… There is a tie for the top spot!

Steve
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