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Posted by: Don, April 16th, 2024, 4:47pm
The First Bout by Caden Wesson - Short, Drama - A young boxer experiences his first underground fight. 4 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Yuvraj, April 16th, 2024, 6:46pm; Reply: 1
Hey! Caden! Hope you're on the discussion board.
The story is pretty much by the books—it has all the tropes of a boxing movie. However, the ending is anticlimactic. So, there is nothing much that I could point out.
There are some typos that I spotted.
Don't forgot the basics. - forget.
This ain't no redneck backyard fight like your used too. - you're.
Good luck.
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