Hey! Caden! Hope you're on the discussion board.
The story is pretty much by the books—it has all the tropes of a boxing movie. However, the ending is anticlimactic. So, there is nothing much that I could point out.
There are some typos that I spotted.
Don't forgot the basics. - forget.
This ain't no redneck backyard fight like your used too. - you're.
Good luck. |