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leitskev
Posted: June 7th, 2019, 5:06pm Report to Moderator
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Reading Frank's comment...yeah, that could have been a really cool way to do this and make it horror. What is SHE saw them as bobbleheads, but was hallucinating, and at the end when she kills them we see they were real! Lol, I need to cut back on the coffee. But that seems like an interesting idea.
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Quoted from leitskev
Reading Frank's comment...yeah, that could have been a really cool way to do this and make it horror. What is SHE saw them as bobbleheads, but was hallucinating, and at the end when she kills them we see they were real! Lol, I need to cut back on the coffee. But that seems like an interesting idea.


I agree with Kevin and Frank. That would have been a Hell of a twist ending.
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Posted: June 7th, 2019, 9:19pm Report to Moderator
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I liked the premise of this, and I appreciate the ending, but it's just silly. I had a hard time getting past page one -- I was trying to wrap my head around the fact that the Dr. was a bobblehead too. That kinda threw me off, but I went with it. The dialogue didn't do much for me, either. I'd say this one should have been written (again?) before submitting.

Steve


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