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DustinBowcot
Posted: August 27th, 2019, 2:10am Report to Moderator
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I'm sure I have a thread for this somewhere but I couldn't find it.

This film, Farside, was produced in 2017 and it's still not available for the public yet. This is the biggest short I've had made so far with a budget of £17,000.

It has just been officially selected for the Aesthetica short film festival in York which is a BAFTA-qualifying festival. Do well here and we're off to BAFTA.

https://vimeo.com/217236270

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The trailer looks good.  

The video is crisp, the color grading has a nice style, the prayer over the shot of "change" has a nice feel to it.

The only suggestion I have for future trailers of yours is to show the shot for a few seconds, then have the subtitles come in, or have the shot linger for a few seconds more to take it in.

I was reading the subtitles and then wanted to look at the video, but the image changed.
I noticed this most with the marionette.

What was this shot on?

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DustinBowcot
Posted: August 31st, 2019, 6:42am Report to Moderator
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I've been away for a few days and, wow, massive response to this thread. I suppose this confirms what I've suspected for a while now.

Thanks, Jordan. I don't want to be impolite and leave your post hanging. I've no idea what it was shot on. This film was put together by professionals and I wouldn't want to pass your advice on because I am just a writer and I'd sound like an idiot saying it.

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I'd say most people's attention might be on the current challenge. A lot of things get overlooked when one in running.

Trailer looks great, very professionally shot.

That's a massive budget for a short, very nice.


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Quoted from DustinBowcot
I'm sure I have a thread for this somewhere but I couldn't find it.

This film, Farside, was produced in 2017 and it's still not available for the public yet. This is the biggest short I've had made so far with a budget of £17,000.

It has just been officially selected for the Aesthetica short film festival in York which is a BAFTA-qualifying festival. Do well here and we're off to BAFTA.

https://vimeo.com/217236270


Congrats. mate - keeping my fingers crossed for ya.

Trailer looks very professional.

When do the festival selections get made?


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I hadn´t really seen this yet. I have been busy lately though, but I do try to read all comments. Perhaps embedding it instead of just a link would make it more inviting for people to watch it?

I watched it and was intrigued. Hope to get to see the final film. Cheers.


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Yep, I've been distracted with the challenge discussions. I even had it on my list to watch but then honestly I forgot. I also searched for a link to the script the other day, but zilch - you probably had it removed?

I gotta say my first impression is it's a rather low-key trailer. The visuals are very pro, with an intriguing vibe. I paused it to close up on this: ain't nowt worth owt in ere  

But truthfully I followed this link to find out more:
https://farsidefilm.co.uk/

There is something to be said for showing too much in trailers to the point you think why bother seeing the film cause you've already seen it. This teaser however was a little underwhelming for me.

The thing that does sell it for me is the info dump in that other link (above), and watching Ash Morris's other hard hitting film : Bare. Wow. Obviously your script is in more than capable hands.

Wishing you luck.
A BAFTA. Now that'd be something.



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The 'general' problem is clear and possibly, to me, rightfully mentioned,

I saw the trailer - watched it immediately, when it was posted; then haven't had something to say. As a Prussian blah with the older Englishman it's my task to be here now



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The general problem means I do miss updates.

Watched the trailer, liked it. Well shot and a really eerie atmosphere. Best of luck with the festival and I hope you get to BAFTA.


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Just seeing it and really liking the trailer. It might be not what I think it is.
I’m curious as to what if it makes me feel feelings. At any rate being it and good luck with Bafta’s
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DustinBowcot
Posted: December 3rd, 2020, 7:49am Report to Moderator
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There is a link available to watch this film now if you would like to. It has had a great festival run over the two years and gained prizes for best actress etc, but none for best screenplay

Still, this is possibly the best film I've had made in terms of production value and possibly even story so I'm really proud of it. I'm not sure of any other public links to it, this link leads to the producer's website.

https://sorchaa.com/farside-short-film

ATB,
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Holy guacamole!

Ahoy Dustin

It's been a while. Good to see you back. Congrats on the success of the film. We'll check it out later in the day. -A



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DustinBowcot
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Holy guacamole!

Ahoy Dustin

It's been a while. Good to see you back. Congrats on the success of the film. We'll check it out later in the day. -A



Thanks, Ghostie, good to see you guys are still here. I hope you're both well.
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That was great! Really pro looking and sounding. CONGRATULATIONS!

It was a little unclear to me if this was a refugee camp or like a trailer park type thing. I guess in the UK people would know right away.


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An impressive piece of work here -- definitely something to be proud of. Tightly plotted and effective, nice to look at, good performances.

I'm heavily predisposed against this sort of multiculturalism-as-tragedy melodrama, but to my eye this delivers on exactly what it's intending to.

Re: acting awards and no writing awards -- I think the social realist aesthetic scrambles people's brains. The further towards this end of the spectrum, the more people unconsciously credit the actors rather than the writer. The writing is clearly the standout aspect of this short.

Thanks for sharing!
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Long time, no see, Dustin, good to see you're around -- I knew something was missing when I came back to SS.

This was a fantastic short film, congratulations on its success! The acting and direction was great... as was the writing. Good shit, man!

-- Michael


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Really well done, mate - congrats! Acting was superb.


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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from Grandma Bear
That was great! Really pro looking and sounding. CONGRATULATIONS!

It was a little unclear to me if this was a refugee camp or like a trailer park type thing. I guess in the UK people would know right away.


Ah, yes... believe it or not, those caravans belong to a holiday park. We have possibly hundreds of these dotted around the country. They offer cheap holidays where one stays in a caravan on a resort. the resorts are all old, harking back to the 1980s (latest). There will be an old pub and some land here and there dedicated to sports and games for kids.

I have actually done this type of 'holiday' twice myself. They have them in France too, although we stayed in a cabin on that occasion and it was way more comfortable. Possibly because it was so hot

It's very funny though.... 'trailer park thing' is where Brits (some) holiday. Some buy the homes to rent out to others and some actually retire to them. They cost around 20-50K (£s) to buy outright and then there are rental fees for the land.
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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from Heretic
An impressive piece of work here -- definitely something to be proud of. Tightly plotted and effective, nice to look at, good performances.

I'm heavily predisposed against this sort of multiculturalism-as-tragedy melodrama, but to my eye this delivers on exactly what it's intending to.

Re: acting awards and no writing awards -- I think the social realist aesthetic scrambles people's brains. The further towards this end of the spectrum, the more people unconsciously credit the actors rather than the writer. The writing is clearly the standout aspect of this short.

Thanks for sharing!


Ha, I'm against it too. This wasn't my story but I like to think I can write anything. I recently adapted Heidi into an audio drama, for example.

As much as I appreciate your kind comment regarding the writing, I think the direction makes this story what it is. He has a great style that I would love to work with again.

Cheers, I hope things are going well for you.
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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from spesh2k
Long time, no see, Dustin, good to see you're around -- I knew something was missing when I came back to SS.

This was a fantastic short film, congratulations on its success! The acting and direction was great... as was the writing. Good shit, man!

-- Michael


I like to take the occasional 'time out'. Thanks, Michael, I hope you're finding regular work.


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Really well done, mate - congrats! Acting was superb.


Cheers, Dave. I'm going to check out 'The Other Woman' during my work break later. It sounds like a good un.
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I was just asking in another thread where Dustin went, and here you are!

That was great work. Something to be truly proud of. Sounds like its had quite the festival run and well-deserved. Thanks for sharing.


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Nice one, Dustin. Great work all round.


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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from MarkItZero
I was just asking in another thread where Dustin went, and here you are!

That was great work. Something to be truly proud of. Sounds like its had quite the festival run and well-deserved. Thanks for sharing.


You must have said my name three times.

Thanks, mate, I hope some good things are happening and/or coming your way.
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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from Warren
Nice one, Dustin. Great work all round.


Cheers, Warren. I don't need to wish you well as I'm sure you have lots going on. Good luck with it all.
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I remember the trailer left me a little wanting, but Dustin, this was beautifully done.

Could see what it was building towards with the nail-biting tension and the impending collision course of the two guys, but it worked perfectly on me.

I really want to know did he manage to revive her, or did they leave that up in the air?
All the performances were terrific. Could see why the lead actress nabbed an award. She was a natural.

P.S. I'm curious ... This was someone else's story and you landed the writing assignment? How'd that come about?


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DustinBowcot
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It was left in the air regarding whether she makes it or not. All veteran actors in this with lots of work under their belts. Sacha worked for 9 years on Coronation Street and has lots of other TV stuff on her resume. Amir El Masry had a BAFTA nomination this year - although for something else. Shane Atwooll though was actually my favourite - himself a very experienced actor.

I got this job through a contact. I won't name-drop but he's quite a well-known actor in the UK who now does a lot of theatre and pantomime - well, not now. He was originally supposed to have Shane Atwooll's part but something else came up that was far bigger.

I'm glad it worked for you and thank you for commenting. Oh, congrats on gaining the writer's choice for Short Fuse.
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Thanks for posting that Dustin, it was a really good watch. Great job all round. The overlapping scenes were well done, such an effective way to build tension.


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Quoted from Heretic


I'm heavily predisposed against this sort of multiculturalism-as-tragedy melodrama


I don' like these type of dramas either, but I did like this movie.  
Pacing was perfect.

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DustinBowcot
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Thank you, Kirsten and Miranda. Glad it worked for you both. I agree that the direction and acting made all the difference with a fairly standard story.

Cheers,
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