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NiK
Posted: September 27th, 2008, 5:19am
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Here is the photo Javier suggested in a previous post.
I like it.
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stebrown
Posted: September 27th, 2008, 5:20am
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How about all these guys have in some way double-crossed the main fella (who runs the game), they don't think he's onto them but he's either going to rip them off (cheat to win the game) or just kill them all?
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NiK
Posted: September 27th, 2008, 5:26am
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How about all these guys have in some way double-crossed the main fella (who runs the game), they don't think he's onto them but he's either going to rip them off (cheat to win the game) or just kill them all?
Cool.
But why???
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stebrown
Posted: September 27th, 2008, 5:30am
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They all used to work for him -- which leads into another confine for the individual stories. What have these guys been doing since working for the mob. They each had money they stole from the boss (did they waste it, are they stinking rich now after wise investment, maybe they're running their own gang). Obvious question is why would they go to the game? Maybe they have no choice. Boss sends a heavy to invite them, if they say 'no' they think the boss'll know what they did.
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NiK
Posted: September 27th, 2008, 5:37am
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If the one hosting the party is a mob, than this will turn in a mob genre i guess. What if they don't know about this thing at all. But somehow each character from each story goes to let's say "HOLLA CASINO" and finds out about this game. So we have all our character in the same place going in the same room to play. But then we have to decide what happens there.
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jayrex
Posted: October 5th, 2008, 2:34pm
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Hey, I was wondering how it was going for everyone? I'm at the four minute mark. Not alot but I'm just trying to develop my character's sense of losing reality. I have my character getting informed by Ste's character about the card game. I have my own personal site where I can post our efforts up and view what each other's work. What do you think? By doing this we can offer suggestions and stop/correct what we potentially may write. I definitely think I need a second opinion.
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jayrex
Posted: October 5th, 2008, 4:37pm
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http://www.freewebs.com/jayrex007/index.htm Here's the link to my site as mentioned above.
I have tried to create a place where we can come back to, to collaborate easier together.
I have already uploaded my script so far.
I've nicknamed the feature The Italian Connection.
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NiK
Posted: October 6th, 2008, 3:32am
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Javier, i will be reading the script soon. I'm a little stuck with my script. Trying to find the proper idea to work it out. Once i have it i will finish it immediately. Good thing you did that website so we can keep more informed.
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jayrex
Posted: October 7th, 2008, 2:08pm
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Hello card sharks, I've posted Ste's script up alongside my script. I must say it already sounds interesting. Ian, have you started? Nik, should I put your rules up on my site?
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NiK
Posted: October 8th, 2008, 2:35am
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Nik, should I put your rules up on my site?
Sure.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
by the way.
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jayrex
Posted: October 8th, 2008, 1:55pm
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Done. I've put up your rules & suggestions that Ste mentioned. Nik, also read that you were unsure about card games. Download a demo of a poker or texas holdin' game. Learn the difference between two pair or three of a kind. And thanks. The birthday has gone smoothly. The celebrations will be on hold till the weekend. The writing my take a backseat this weekend.
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