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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 21st, 2012, 11:56pm Report to Moderator
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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Another thing that I think should be kept up with in the next one is a running list of plot notes. Some entries, things get brought up that are never heard about again. At some point, there's got to be some kind of consistency.

That's my take, though.


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Penoyer79
Posted: September 22nd, 2012, 12:29am Report to Moderator
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Chaos isn't a pit, it's a ladder.

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with jenna now a lapdog of satan.... Desean Quinn is now the sole surviving "original" character

Michael,
adding some kind of markers/indicators on the map as to which sections of the base have been ruptured or are uninhabitable would be helpful


FYI:
if anyone passes on their turn.... i'll gladly volunteer to jump in.
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mcornetto
Posted: September 22nd, 2012, 12:44am Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Penoyer79

Michael,
adding some kind of markers/indicators on the map as to which sections of the base have been ruptured or are uninhabitable would be helpful


Not as easy as it sounds.  

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Penoyer79
Posted: September 22nd, 2012, 2:17am Report to Moderator
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you can do it like the characters? but instead of the name just have the word BREACH or RUPTURE pointing to the damaged area
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mcornetto
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I can but it's getting tough to read.
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What's next? High School Musical?

Jordan, an exciting episode but when do we need imps and ohm San Tan ohm to do our killing for us?
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So I have to follow Jordan...Jesus! lol.

A quick question to everyone; it says Imran is alive but I thought I killed him off with the devil's eyes?  Have I missed something?

I've also got two characters in the same location but apparently don't know each other are there?  Patricia and Franklin are both in Command?

My heads fried and I haven't written a word yet lol.

Will get this up tomorrow.....


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mcornetto
Posted: September 22nd, 2012, 4:45pm Report to Moderator
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If the complete line is greyed out the character is deceased.  I just forgot to put a yes in the column.  
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mcornetto
Posted: September 23rd, 2012, 4:42pm Report to Moderator
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Good entry alffy, even though it's apparent you don't like to follow emailed instructions.  

So in a surprise move Jenna is dead, I think, which would mean nawazm11 is next.   So there's no confusion - he needs to kill Marty who is the only character alone at the start of his turn.  

I have to head out to work, so I can't update things until I get back home.  

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Grear entry allfy, some good ass kicking in there! Excited to see where things go from here,!


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Oh, man. WTF happened while I was away ? I really think the story shouldn't have swayed in this direction but people seem to be fine with it so I won't say anything.

I'll get on my turn tonight and make it more fucked up than it already is, a lot of fun on my turn.
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Penoyer79
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LOL... apparently we arent above "jumping the shark" on this board.
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mcornetto
Posted: September 24th, 2012, 4:56am Report to Moderator
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All updated.  Only six characters left to go.  
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What...the...hell...?

So when I left this on Friday, I was the last one to have gone, and the story was flowing pretty well. How did all hell break loose? For the record, I would have objected to the demonic twist. It doesn't make any sense in the context of the story. Was I surprised? Oh yes. Did I expect it? Not at all. Know why? Because I also don't expect a demonic horde to explode from the bottom of the parking garage as I walk to my car. Might as well have Mr. Bean show up with a vacuum cleaner to clear up the blood and have Darth Vader defeat Satan in an epic lightsaber battle and then have Mother Theresa drop down in in the Tardis to bless the planet. It would make as much sense at this point as what we've got going on.

Yeah, it jumped the shark, and I'm not above saying something.

It was going so well, too.


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alffy
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I never said Jenna was dead, did I?  I think I haven't made it too clear that I killed off DeSean and not Jenna?


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