I've been writing for about 4 months now and I'm addicted. I submitted my first pilot for a tv show a few days ago and I've been a nervous wreck since. Although, I can't wait to see what other people think of it. I have a lot of growing to do as a writer and I'm excited to see where I'm at a year from now. I love writing comedy and it has always came natural to me in real life, but I realize it's a totally different ball game writing.

There is something I did leave in my script that I really need feedback on. Something I know is a no no. I have a few scenes  were I direct the camera. I say,  "camera goes to". I left it in there because I'm unsure how to properly format those specific scenes. So, when the time comes hopefully I can get some help with it. I'm sure you guys/gals will find tons more stuff, yes, I've been lurking on this site for awhile, so I understand the blunt criticism that's coming. I know it will only make me better.

Now, hopefully I didn't scare anyone away from reading my script due to me being a rookie, and whoever gives it a read I hope you enjoy it.

Thanks, Phil

Welcome to SS, Phil.

Welcome, Phil!

Taking a stab at a pilot myself. Would be happy to take a look at your stuff. Good luck.