Re - urban legends - My script was based on the story that Lucille Bell picked up spy radio waves in her teeth.

Link is;

http://altereddimensions.net/2.....dental-work-fillings

That seemed close enough for this challenge.

Quoted from DustinBowcot Not mentioning any names, but, yet again, Jeff didn't enter... and, yet again, he's the angriest reviewer.

I ran him close this time.

Well..not so much angry, but pretty miserable. I stopped reviewing because I was boring myself.

Quoted from Scar Tissue Films I ran him close this time. Well..not so much angry, but pretty miserable. I stopped reviewing because I was boring myself.

I noticed that, Mr Grumpy. Least you were economical about it, I'll give you that.  

I think this challenge was actually quite hard - I didn't even get an entry in - trying too hard to be inventive, so well done to those who played.

Yeah true Lib. That's why I went with the comedy angle - it was easier to come up with a parody of the UL as opposed to creating a new look at one.

I thought this challenge was a tough one but thought I'd give it a whirl anyway. I don't write much at all, in fact this was only the third script I've written, so was relatively happy with it and some of the feedback.

There were some really good entries in this, so well done on a good job.

I think Jeff may have given up on writing and just taken up full time trolling

Quoted from Reef Dreamer If it's any comfort I was asked whether this was my first OWC, and told that my script lacked a sub plot - not had that one thrown at me before for a one week short script challenge

Frankly Reef - Teeth was in my top five or so.  So there.

As for my UL for Strangers.  Kinda obvious...  

Pleased to be a part of the OWC. For the first time round, quite happy and agree with the feedback I've gotten. As for the UL used in Happy Anniversary I went with, http://www.snopes.com/horrors/techno/microwavedpet.asp

Change of Heart was far and away my number one.

Quoted from irish eyes Until the next one I degrade

Mark,

I apologize for using the word degrade. It was an overstatement. I wouldn't like it, either.

Henry

Quoted from AnthonyCawood I think Jeff may have given up on writing and just taken up full time trolling

You never know, Anthony.  You just never know.

If my feedback is trolling, please disregard, and accept all the "other" feedback as gospel.  "Decent writing."  "Well done."  "Not too bad."

If anyone disagrees with my feedback and wants clarification, PM me, or just call me right out on your script.

I seem to know how to turn Jeff on.      

Quoted from mmmarnie I seem to know how to turn Jeff on.

LOL...

You did well here, Marnie.  Very impressive and the easy winner, in my book.

Quoted from mmmarnie I seem to know how to turn Jeff on.

Do you show him pictures of men in tight denim shorts?

Even though the challenge is over, don't go spamming this thread with unnecessary posts.

Jeff had a couple of WTF moments over two technical things in "Hagridden."

1. Page numbering.
I use Celtex on an ipad Mini, and it does not let you set up a title page. I get around this by moving the first page to the second-page position, which leaves the first page blank for a title page. As a result, the title page is numbered as Page One.

2. Four blank pages at the end.
I had no idea they were there -- or how they got there. The script was never any longer than it is. Someone commented that those four blank pages were the best part of my script.

Thanks to all who made an effort to see what was going on in "Hagridden." I may restore a line or two to make certain elements clearer.

Henry