SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is May 1st, 2024, 10:17pm
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
Please do read the guidelines that govern behavior on the discussion board. It will make for a much more pleasant experience for everyone. A word about SimplyScripts and Censorship


Produced Script Database (Updated!)

Short Script of the Day | Featured Script of the Month | Featured Short Scripts Available for Production
Submit Your Script

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
All screenplays on the simplyscripts.com and simplyscripts.net domain are copyrighted to their respective authors. All rights reserved. This screenplaymay not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author.
Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Screenwriting Discussion    Screenwriting Class  ›  Interesting ways to show time passing Moderators: George Willson
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 6 Guests

 Pages: 1
Recommend Print
  Author    Interesting ways to show time passing  (currently 745 views)
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: May 23rd, 2007, 1:56pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
I'm working on a script at the moment. It all takes place in one locatrion, a small terraced house.

I'm looking for interesting ways to show time passing and I'm getting a mental block.

Anyone have any suggestions?
Logged Offline
Private Message
greg
Posted: May 23rd, 2007, 2:11pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Oh Hi

Location
San Diego, California
Posts
1680
Posts Per Day
0.24
Depends how much time you're talking about.  A couple of simple ways is to show day turn to night if it's just a short time, or if it's longer then you can show the seasons changing, i.e. snow, leaves changing color, etc.

Hope that helps some.


Be excellent to each other
Logged
Private Message Reply: 1 - 8
James McClung
Posted: May 23rd, 2007, 2:44pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients



Location
Washington, D.C.
Posts
3293
Posts Per Day
0.48
I think I know what you're talking about. You mean showing time passing without changing the time of day? Inserting LATER in the slug or even by itself does the trick. Not very interesting but it gets the job done. Otherwise you could try a series of dissolves. Maybe show the clouds or shadows moving over time. It's easy to go overboard with that approach though. If this isn't what you're trying to do, I think Greg's advice is pretty solid.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 2 - 8
Death Monkey
Posted: May 24th, 2007, 9:43am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Viet-goddamn-nam is what happened to me!

Location
The All Spin Zone
Posts
983
Posts Per Day
0.15
Isn't "LATER" frowned upon by filmmakers?

I think I read that as a faux pas somehwere.


"The Flux capacitor. It's what makes time travel possible."

The Mute (short)
The Pool (short)
Tall Tales (short)
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 3 - 8
Mr.Z
Posted: May 24th, 2007, 10:02am Report to Moderator
Been Around



Location
Buenos Aires - Argentina
Posts
743
Posts Per Day
0.11
What's frowned upon is: "TWO MINUTES LATER", "THREE DAYS LATER", etc, because that's information on the page that will be lost on screen. The camera can't record the exact time that passed between two scenes, unless there's a close up on a clock or calendar (which means the writer should include this elements in the descriptions).

Just "LATER" is fine and something that the director could easily achieve by a slow dissolve.


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 4 - 8
jerdol
Posted: May 26th, 2007, 9:02pm Report to Moderator
New


Location
Haifa, Israel
Posts
112
Posts Per Day
0.02
Cliche suggestion, but one of those "cliche for a reason" ones:  Show a clock with the time, then dissolve to the new time.  Simple, easy, clear.


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 5 - 8
Gaara
Posted: June 7th, 2007, 3:47pm Report to Moderator
New


I had an itch on my face...so I scratched it

Location
Sunderland, England
Posts
161
Posts Per Day
0.02
how would I write this

I want to show someone cooking beans on toast but I don't want to show the whole process.

Basically I just want them putting the beans on the stove to cook and immediately go to them tucking in to their meal.


check out episodes 1 - 3 of Mister D.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 6 - 8
Shelton
Posted: June 7th, 2007, 5:09pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients



Location
Chicago
Posts
3292
Posts Per Day
0.49
My first question would be to ask whether or not it's imperative to show him putting the beans on the stove prior to eating them.

If it is, you could write that description, then follow it up with a new slugline that has LATER at the end, or switch to another room entirely for a brief period before having him go back and retrieve his beans.


Shelton's IMDb Profile

"I think I did pretty well, considering I started out with nothing but a bunch of blank paper." - Steve Martin
Logged Offline
Private Message AIM Reply: 7 - 8
Gaara
Posted: June 7th, 2007, 5:18pm Report to Moderator
New


I had an itch on my face...so I scratched it

Location
Sunderland, England
Posts
161
Posts Per Day
0.02
Well i suppose it isn't really imperative

Still thanks for the reply at least I have a better idea of what to do.


check out episodes 1 - 3 of Mister D.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 8 - 8
 Pages: 1
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    Screenwriting Class  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on


Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006