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What are the goals of this discussion? The last discussion went all over the place and didn't really accomplish anything. I'm not interested if this is going to be like the Countdown discussion.
From what I gather, Breanne wants to look into the intricacies of the script and figure out just what it is that made it sell.
It's a rom-com. The only way I see it going the way of the countdown thread is if everyone starts chiming in with "I can't believe this p.o.s sold". I hope that won't be the case, since I thought the script was pretty good.
Anyway, if this is what is ultimately decided, I will be keeping a close eye on the thread (like I wouldn't anyway) and chiming in with my own thoughts in regard to the rom-com genre.
The objective is to study a script that sold in Hollywood; to examine what made it sell; and to use it as a model to help give us a better understanding of how to improve our own work toward the goal of selling a script.
The script we’ll be studying is I Want to Fuck Your Sister. (I don’t really want to…well actually I don’t know your sister so I don’t really know…never mind…(ahem)…moving along.)
The first thing that needs to be done is we all need a copy of the script. Mike has graciously agreed to send a copy to anyone from the club who requests it so let Mike know if you want to participate. While on the subject, Mike, I need a copy.
Here are the ground rules (yes there are rules):
1) We are not here to discuss what’s wrong with the script. We are here to discuss what’s right about it. Arguments over its artistic merits will be struck down with swift justice from the whip wielding Dominatrix of Doom.
(*Note: in Bert’s case, since he actually desires punishment from the whip wielding Dominatrix of Doom, his punishment shall be the withholding of punishment -- ahh, clever, huh?)
2) Read the entire script before commenting on the script. I’m not saying you can’t post at all in the thread before you read the whole script, just that we want to look at how each portion of the script relates to the whole.
3) Be nice! Just remember; we all have the same ultimate goal, which is to sell our work. Everyone has their own opinion and is entitled to it. Personal attacks will be met with swift justice….you get the picture.
Basically anything that has to do with what makes this script a desired and successful script is open for discussion. As far as what particular subject to begin with; it’s hard to say without cracking the script open.
I do want to begin with the script itself. I want to examine the character introductions; When/how they occur; The inciting incident; What is it and when does it occur?; What’s the crisis?, etc; The setup; How is it metered?; Is there a pivotal action that occurs on every page? Is there some pivotal new information introduced on every page?
Now go out there Team Script Club and read! (after Mike sends you the script. )
PS. If I'm really good, can I whip bert for you? Always wanted to.
I like how Bert gets all the love when he's only 64% as handsome as I am.
On a serious note...
Breanne,
I have two email addresses for you. One seems to be no good, and the other one is kicking back at me and saying your inbox is full*. Do you have a third one I can try?
* I stuffed Breanne's inbox. Bert is now down to 62%
I have two email addresses for you. One seems to be no good, and the other one is kicking back at me and saying your inbox is full*. Do you have a third one I can try?
I called my husband and he said my account should accept a file that size. He told me not to do anything until he looks at it. He’s going to check it out sometime tonight.
I would appreciate a copy, too, Shelton. And as for all of your percentage pontification -- just remember that nice guys finish last, funny-boy.
That seems to put the odds heavily out of your favor, Bertram.
Quoted from Breanne
Mike, Pia,
I called my husband and he said my account should accept a file that size. He told me not to do anything until he looks at it. He’s going to check it out sometime tonight.
I sent a gmail invite to your email address anyway, just in case you'd like to use it.
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