Great Pia! Welldone psychological work here. You're the first fella on SS that decoded the meaning of one of my works with accurated thinking and uncovered how huge is my insanity.

To tell a story just  to tell a story for me doesn't work at all. I love to say more, but not explicit and even when I'm very explicity I'm not: always has something behind this explicty.

Thanks anyway my dear psychologist!

I quite enjoyed the script. I'm not sure where I started, and I definitely don't know where I landed but I liked the trip.

Yes, I wrote a horror, and I am just sick, sick, sick! If there is one script I don't want my parents reading ... They haul me off to the aylum and lament where they went wrong.

Nomally I'm not a fan of weird scripts. I liked this one, because it catches the weird disconnect between writing and the face we present to the world.

I'm a nice, girl next door. However. in my writing I do explore some dark aspects of human nature and that would include the dark parts of my own mind.

Your short captures that weird duality, the mask of normality we need to get through life, have friends, get jobs, and then the real lives we share with our families and in our writing.

And the screenwriting references were hilarious. They added another whacked touch to a surreal script. Well done.

Hey Grace! Thanks a lot for you mature comments, dude. I loved realy to see how the SS girls taked from this unpretentious piece some portion of juice!

Your welcome.

Hello Helio! Thank you for welcoming to the site as well as many other writers here. I thought I'd check this out. Don't roll your eyes if I state what has already been said.

This was definately a surreal script, and I don't get it one bit! From what I've read from other board prowler's posts is that you are a surreal writer.

I had a few laughs reading this, because how violent this was, and how the characters just went on going "dadada..." like nothing was happening. Now I'm just rambling, and not helping you at all... *Sigh*

I guess it helps you, knowing you pleased another reader. A good short, even as maniacal as it was. You have good formatting. A strange story. And my thumbs are up for you.

: )

Thanks a lot  Peter. Less by less you will get the thing. Haha!

Merry Christmas!

Helio

PS Let me know about your script and I will read it, okay?

Hey, Helio. It's been a while since I've read one of your scripts so I decided to take trip back to memory lane. And I must say the trip was a doozy. Not reading any reviews before, I'm keeping this in my honest perspective. I was so confused reading this, yet it was very funny.You keep surprising your readers everytime. And I congradulate you for that. other than that, i'm speechless with a befuddled mind and a touch of humor in me.

Gabe

Has just one word for this....Thanks a lot tmas, Gabe! Oops, five words! Jingle, jingle, jingle...HA-HA-HA a funny holiday and Merry Christmas to you by Santa Clown!