wots wiv the seriousness. i submitted it for a joke, i am planning to extend this wivout the goose thing. I have just submitted the first part of another script set in 1950s Scotland. Tell me what you think.

I'll pass.  Thanks.


Phil

This is a prime example of exactly the kind of script we need people to stop posting.

It’s as though you cranked out a whopping one page of mundane daily grind before inspiration became a struggle. From there, it appears that you strained hopelessly to think of a direction to go with your story for all of about two minutes before you glanced at a television commercial and got an idea for a quick ending (mercy killing might be a more accurate description).

Quoted from RobertSpence wots wiv the seriousness. i submitted it for a joke, i am planning to extend this wivout the goose thing. I have just submitted the first part of another script set in 1950s Scotland. Tell me what you think.

Your joke took time to upload along with the works of other writers who actually care about the craft of writing. If even one of those serious writers ever has to wait because of a joke such as yours, that would be a shame.

Some of the writers around here are serious about being writers. And of the ones who write as a hobby with no intentions of pursuing it as a career, most at least respect the craft and appreciate the seriousness of the business.

A reader also deserves respect. There are too many scripts to read that can be both enjoyed as literary material as well as used to enhance one’s own writing skills. Works such as yours only waste people’s time. That’s “wots wiv” the seriousness.

I too will pass on your work from now on. Your writing is what’s called lazy writing.