Hey Michel, mon ami! Hulá-lá! It was one  the most clever idea you've wrote, mon ami, If I was a movie director I'd option it and killed my stepmother in order to take money enough to shot it!

Congrats!

A new title for it: SMART AND FAST!

yeah, she definitely outsmarted the other guys (and readers   ) can't wait
to see what else happend and I'd love to get some backstory on the female

In fact, Toni will soon be back. I don't if she'll show other parts of her anatomy (maybe... , but she'll be back.

Any way, thanks to you for your comments and remember this is just for fun.

Michel

Hey Michael, I sent you an email yesterday regarding this... Did you get it?

Either way, I loved this short. Simple, funny and easy to shoot. Your stuff makes me laugh when I read them, it's great.

Wonderfully simple, short and funny. I love reading these kinds of scripts from you Michel. You come up with them so fast too, it's amazing.

It'd be nice to see some more from this mysterious Toni. She seems like a very cool character. Someone you wouldn't mind seeing returning every now in then. Good Job once again, Michel.

Hi Coffee and Parkster,

Thank you for your reviews. Glad you had fun. I always try to make short easy to shoot.

Guess Toni would soon come back, but I doubt she will be as smart as in this one.

Well, you'll see...  


Michel

It is very well written, but in reality it is completely infeasible.

The players are not allowed to touch the chips and as has already been mentioned the croupiers pay out 36 to one.

They remove all the losing chips with a little shovel and pay out the ones that remain.

Despite what George says, this is IMHO a gaping hole in the plot.

The manager would be called, they would check video footage and Toni would be in serious trouble.

It would make more sense if she was a decoy for someone else sat at the table, who slyly moves some chips into the winning position.

Again, in reality this will likely result in broken legs, but it is slightly more realistic than what is here at the moment.

Good effort though.

Don't mean to be so negative, it's just that if I saw this in a film it would annoy me tremendously.

Cheers, Rick.