I really enjoyed this script. It was a fast read and really enjoyable. The dialouge worked really well and you seemed to make an unbelievable situation into a believable situation.

Another good suggestion.  I'll fix that too, thanks, Dave.

Best screenplay I have read here to date.  You kept me laughing the whole time.

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Thanks for such a kind comment, Dave.

This one was pretty good, Dave.

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I enjoyed the gags that came from the set up about medical training for middle management. The only thing that stood out for me was that Dave's sick days didn't seem to be that excessive (3 days in eight months) but on the other hand, I guess that makes Jim's behaviour all the more bizarre.

Good luck with the short film.

Thanks to all for the positive feedback. I will incorporate into final draft. Cheers!