I'M THE WRITER OF THIS;  JUST IN CASE YOUR WONDERING:
HERES THE ANSWERS YOU WERE LOOKING FOR:

This script is actually the beginning to a feature movie I was trying to make.  The reason I put it on here is to see if I'm doing okay as far as writing and formatting goes.  

The movie ended with an explosion, cause the story needed an ending- plus I was too lazy to think of one.  

The people in the beginning all add up to story about a girl who gets kidnapped.  So this first 10 minutes is really is just an exposition of characters.

As for the riddle, it truly is a common riddle- I got it off a website.  
The answer  is 60 minutes.  

But I see what you mean.  Thanks for your input.

I didn't really understand this script. It was very hard to follow and I found it to be jumpy. The twist made no sense, even after I read it twice. I admit you created a terrificly mysterious/creepy mood and the ending sort of payed it off, but I didn't understand.

With the format, on your sluglines you need a . between the INT/EXT and the PLACE.

the dialogue was okay, needs some fixing.

If you're up for it, you may read one of my shorts in my sig.