Quoted from Mr.Ripley The scene between Tom and James is an idea that I'm playing around with to include in the revision. Tom is James' killer side.  If more readers like this, then I'm keeping it.

That is identical to Mr. Brooks. I would try and come up with something a little different. Overall the story was fine. A lot was left out however. How does the geek get Jack all tied and taped up? We need to get an idea of how these things happened. Where did they find Jack's body? These are small deatils, but important ones.

Thanks for the read, pants.

I'm aware of the Mr. Brooks similarity. I'm currently thinking of creating something up.

As for the things I left out, I wanted to leave  it for the reader to imagine, I guess. It failed. lol. But I learned. I'm in the moment of revising all my past scripts, so expect a revision on this one. don't know when, but it's coming.

Gabe