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Pia's Package by Sean Elwood (thedeadwalk2nite) - Short, Comedy - One million dollars. Ten desperate men. One hot chick. Which are they more after, and how will they eliminate the competition? 28 pages - pdf, format
I have to hand it to you. That was some funny shit. I'm not going to crit it because I know it was just for fun but it gave me such a laugh. And BTW it's not how big your signature is that matters, it's how you use it.
I had Pia and Jordan review over this because I just wrote it for fun (and I had also thought over the idea for about an hour until I came on here and realized that the whole genre and theme was a joke...), but Pia insisted that I posted it, so I did. I was afraid that it wouldn't go too well, considering I'm not too well with comedy, but I am very relieved to see that two people already like it (well, I don't know if Tyler likes it, but oh well...)
Michael: I'm glad it made you laugh And Re: your signature...That's true, but every time I scroll down, my cursor rolls over your signature, so then only your signature begins to scroll down, so I have to move my cursor out from over your sig, and continue scrolling. So much work...
And Re: your signature...That's true, but every time I scroll down, my cursor rolls over your signature, so then only your signature begins to scroll down, so I have to move my cursor out from over your sig, and continue scrolling. So much work...
Marketing rule #1: Once you've got them there, keep them there
Marketing rule #1: Once you've got them there, keep them there
Thanks for putting a smile on my face.
Quoted from George Willson
I'll take solace in the idea that I'm not so annoying that you want me killed off. Yay me.
I was thinking of putting you in there as the secret agent who follows the people around and creates traps for them, but then I ran into the problem of tying you in the rest of the story. Which leads to the sequel: "Pia's Package: The George Willson Delivery"
Damn, I couldn't even think of a good joke for that, either. Sorry to let you down twice, George. Maybe Tyler can cast you as the main character in his Revenge script
I think this is hilarious. Well written with terrific visuals, action and dialogue. The characters were totally believable, and seemed as though they may even be people we know in our regular lives. Well done.
Did I ever tell you about the zombie script I thought about writing. . .
Nice one Sean, and you had to have me hooked up with Zack, you fucking asshole, you know how long that would have lasted, like three seconds, I would have been chopping away at that chain immediately...lol.
Anyways very funny, I liked yours and James fate, very appropriate
I have to admit though that I was getting a bit nervous when I was old and fat all of a sudden. I was releaved to find out it was just Don in a old and fat "me" suit.
Great action writing on your part. And comedic action too. Hard to do.
I read this at work and I must say, it sucked. Why? because I wasn't involved. lol. (JOKE)
It was funny. Poor Higgonator, I'm curious what happened to him? And poor James to suffer that fate. lol. Congrats to you. I can't wait for the revenge tale.
Gabe
Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages. https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/