I thought this was pretty funny. definitely extra points for creativity.

I liked how they all had normal names.

don't forget the hoof and mouth disease. I think that could work well into the script too.

You spelled Brian Brain on page 9.

Dialogue was good.

Don't know what else to say. I enjoyed it. It was a fun read.

Pia  

Hi Pia, thanks for the comments. it's funny when an 'old' one gets a read again! Maybe becaue we won't be getting any newies up till August 1.

On that subject, if we had submitted a script before we knew that was announced, shouldn't those scripts be still put up? I know Don does a great job and needs a break(don't we all...) but it seems a tad unfair to the scripts that were already in the system.

No worries, I'll read your new one when it's up. If I don't just pm me a reminder.  

simply put, loved all the inside jokes and outside references this script makes. a very enjoyable read- quite different from the other scripts ive read on this site. and im always up for something new.

i would really like to see this produced into a jim henson-type puppet show

oh and loved the use of the word wanker. the words "wanker" and "piggy" never gets old

Hi man, thanks for the read. Always a nice surprise when an 'older script' pops up.

This was a bit of piss take on the swine flu scare the other month.

I'll check out some of your stuff if u like.

Love that av. Jaws is my favorite all time film.

Just realised I'd read 'Psychic Meltdown' of yours. Sweet! will check out Male Implants.

This is great, one of my favourite lines is 'Sick? Of course he was! Sick in the
fucking head! Remember how he solved the problem of the low ceiling in his mother’s sty? He cut her fucking head off!'

Laughed out loud at 'Ok, count me in. I don’t mind going last, either'.

The twist on deliverance was really good, albeit a little disturbing!

Excellent stuff

Craig

Hi Craig. thanks for the kind words, glad u liked it.
The reference to Deliverance was for sniper - he was in the process of posting his take on that classic film. I was trying to give him the hurry up!

I will return the favour and check out your stuff. I don't think I've read any. Cheers man.