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Ryan,

Thanks for the time to read and comment on this one. Yes, your interpretation is correct. I do appreciate your comment on my style... I worked hard on that. The murky comment, unfortunately, is spot on. More pages would have helped and some dialogue. I liked your suggestion to have a sister scene first. I need to see that murky water before I post.

Thanks again!

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Pia,

Thanks for the clean, crisp writing comment on this one. I worked hard on it. Maybe next time it'll come more natural.

As always, thanks for the time to read and comment.

Gary
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