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I thought i would bring this to the top again to show you the final Cut of "Serial Killer"
I have passed my thoughts onto the producer and feel some parts do need a little work though it was made on a budget of next to nil so I cant expect too much.
Alex I thought this was well written with the action, I could see that you wanted to build up the tension. But this one could have been a bit shorter, I did like the ending, just wish it got there sooner.
I don't get the story. Why would he stab a cereal box that's expired; I get that it imitates psycho but the cereal box? I don't get it. In Psycho, does the guy say "it's expired" somewhere in the movie? Because then it makes sense. Keep writing!
Criticism, like rain, should be gentle enough to nourish a man's growth without destroying his roots.
Oh!!! Serial Killer! I get it now. It all makes sense now, but still you need bring more attention to the title because I got the joke a day after I read it.
Criticism, like rain, should be gentle enough to nourish a man's growth without destroying his roots.
Oh!!! Serial Killer! I get it now. It all makes sense now, but still you need bring more attention to the title because I got the joke a day after I read it.
Hey Chris,
Glad you got it in the end. The screenplay was originally titled Cereal Killer, though I had so many complaints that it gave the ending away so it was changed to Serial Killer.
The thread is titled Serial Killer, the title page has Serial Killer on it and apart from putting Cereal Killer on his forehead there wasn't much that could be done.
Every person that has read It and watched the video, clicked straight away, so I think it works as it is. Sorry.