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Hi Richard, I'm reading your script right now. I will make notes as I read it and then summarize it at the end.
1. Wow, was that a good, and scary read. That's film-able. It was good. And scary.
To think that they worked the system. You want them to fail. Yet, the bad guys get away with it. Did you base it on that case that happened with the football player?
Oh, that would be a good end. Let them meet up in a decade and have a PI for the school keep on them. If you don't know the case, a woman framed a college football player for rape, but, he didn't rape her. He spent time in jail. He got out, and she approached him and wanted to be friends. Yeah, seriously. She did that. She still had a crush on him. So, he contacted his parole officer and got her on tape saying that she faked it. The school is suing her now.
But, yeah, it was a good story, and I'm sure that has happened, and that's sad. Rape is a terrible thing, and people do use it.
I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good. I enjoy writing the same. Looking to team with anyone!