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Posted: September 10th, 2017, 3:30pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Methodical by Thomas Butcher - Short, Comedy - A method actor causes a scene after meeting with a director who doesn't like him. 10 pages - pdf, format

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Hi Thomas,

This wasn’t too bad, not really my thing but I think some people will enjoy it. There were a few parts where I cracked a smile but definitely no laugh out loud moments.

The writing is pretty good, some passive writing here and there, and what's up with the page numbers at the bottom of the page?

All the best.


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