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Pleb
Posted: March 28th, 2019, 3:05pm Report to Moderator
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Congratulations!

Getting an option on a feature is bigly impressive!


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Thanks guys!

I've had four made already, but they didn't turnout very good. I used to be so disappointed by that. I'm older now and more experienced and looking back, I realize it wasn't the fault of the filmmakers, but rather my scripts. They weren't that good. That's why I have hopes for The Hit. It's a decent script, IMO. You know what they say about filmmaking, start with a great script! Not sure it's great, but it's definitely better than my earlier efforts.


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Getting an option on a feature is bigly impressive!


Not as impressive as getting one produced.  



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Hope things work out this time.

It's a damn good script. Reads very fast. I think you've said people tell you that, I can see why!


That rug really tied the room together.
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Reads very fast. I think you've said people tell you that, I can see why!


This actually comes from me not being a native English speaking person. In order to make any sense at all, I learned early to keep my writing as terse/sparse as possible in order to keep people from  being confused. This has evolved into a very lean style of writing. My writing will never be called beautiful and I cannot do prose, but my style seems to fit right in with script writing. Producers/directors like easy fast reads that doesn't have any fluff. The people that just optioned it called it very well written. I'm sure Jeff would disagree, but...  


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A bank manager and her lover pull off an inside heist, but must form an uneasy alliance in tracking down the associates who skipped out with their share of the loot.

Thanks for the suggestion. Doesn't quite fit the story though...  


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