New Beginnings by Del Wong - Short - Be careful of where you sleep! 1 page - pdf, format

Ha-ha-ha, Del, such a cheesy ending for a 1 pager. But it was too short to actually understand what had happened. Maybe you should stretch it out, explain what had happened, give it a little backstory or something.

Sean

Haha, this is a funny short Del. I liked it. Not much to review though. All I can say is that it was funny.

Isn't New Beginnings that new feminine hygiene spray?

Seriously, this is just a nice piece of irony.  

Quoted from Shelton Isn't New Beginnings that new feminine hygiene spray? Seriously, this is just a nice piece of irony.

Well put.

Believe it or not, there is a Stakewood, Texas.


//del//

I just have to say HMMMMM!!!

One page. Is that all? Ain't gonna try harder?
Well i have one thing to say to you. If your not gonna put the effort in then give up in this field of work. Takes years of hard work to succeed ( I made it frst time due to my innate ability of telling a story ) and if you're gonna continue to write one pagers then stop right there thank you very much

Just wanted to let you know that there are actual competitions out there for one page scripts. You might not like them, but they serve a purpose.

After I saw that it was only one page, I had to check it out.

Haha, you found a new way to kill vampires, well, modern day vampires that is.

Why not write a feature modern day vampire script? Where humans have come to know all of the ways to hunt and kill vampires.

I'm sure with your imagination you'll be able to come up with a decent story.  

Keep writing.

Cindy

No one's looked at this script in over five years and the author's name doesn't ring a bell.  Why pick this one out to read?

Quoted from Charming Man ( I made it frst time due to my innate ability of telling a story )

This is probably your best story yet...


Phil

Quoted from dogglebe No one's looked at this script in over five years and the author's name doesn't ring a bell.  Why pick this one out to read?

Well for me, I saw it on the top of the portal. I didn't even notice the date.

But hey, Charming Man, do you have a script posted here that we could check out. I mean because you said you were able to make it your first time because of your ability to tell a story. I'd like to see how you did it.

Cindy

Quoted from Charming Man One page. Is that all? Ain't gonna try harder? Well i have one thing to say to you. If your not gonna put the effort in then give up in this field of work. Takes years of hard work to succeed ( I made it frst time due to my innate ability of telling a story ) and if you're gonna continue to write one pagers then stop right there thank you very much

@Charming Man...Unless you show some of your work and let us see that you may actually know what you're talking about, albeit harsh, people will just assume you're a troll.  Here to cause trouble, not help.  Let us see if you have the goods.  My guess is you're full of C R A P.  

This Charming Man is great...a real charmer for sure.  I love how you pick up a 6 year old script, in which the writer has a total of 5 posts...and a 1 pager to top it all off.

Charming, ho are you picking your scripts that you so eloquently comment on?  What's your secret?  You're doing a Hell of job, buddy.  Keep it up.

How does a published screenwriter not know the difference between "your" and "you're." I smell a troll...