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Yes by Simon K. Parker - Short - With the Boss away his bodyguard has been put in charge of looking after his young and pretty girlfriend. 14 pages - pdf, format
Haven't seen you around. I took a look over your script. I think it's a first draft, because there's lots of spelling mistakes, skewed grammar, and missed punctuation. Overall, I still liked the story. If you show up on the boards I'll go in-depth with my thoughts.
I think you’re the author of the famous “Zombie Detective”? In any case, I’ve seen a few scripts posted by yourself now but you appear to be a no-show on the boards.
I’ll wait to see if you make an appearance before commenting here.
Your logline is terribly written. I already knnow exactly what the scrpit is going to look like and there's no reason for me to even open it pul sorry to say.
Why do you keep resurrecting old threads in which the writer never even once chimed in?
Why do you keep creating multiple posts instead of just putting your thoughts down in 1 thread?
Why do you keep quoting your own earlier threads when adding a new thought or 2?
It's great to see you reading scripts and [posting feedback, but you have to realize that 95% of your posts are falling on deaf ears.
You understand what I'm saying, bro?
I never looked at my comments with such deep interest as you are.
And I fully understand. If you had interest in screenwriting you would be
more interested in writing or the story content rather than someone else comments on the stories. Like you saaid you may be standing on some strret corner using and smoking some type of drug that will make you respond to someone, comment on a story. If you are keep standing there being smart as keep on writing cell phone bro.
Why do you keep resurrecting old threads in which the writer never even once chimed in?
Why do you keep creating multiple posts instead of just putting your thoughts down in 1 thread?
Why do you keep quoting your own earlier threads when adding a new thought or 2?
It's great to see you reading scripts and [posting feedback, but you have to realize that 95% of your posts are falling on deaf ears.
You understand what I'm saying, bro?
Yes I fully understand you. Cell phone bro. I'm glad you are commenting on my subjects. I like to read some of your screenplays. But not anyhing that has to do with million dollar talking green in the script.