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Don
Posted: February 19th, 2005, 5:51pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Apartment by Jay Lovito (cinema114) - Short, Horror - Strange things happen to a young building superintendent on a lonely night. - rtf format.


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Posted: February 19th, 2005, 8:25pm Report to Moderator
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This story doesn't make any sense to me.  What are you trying to do here?


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Hoi,
I like your story, but i feels uncompleted in the last part. I dont know what, but the end leave to much gues. It's more like the end of an episode.
otherwise if it is good workt out and modifight i can become a good horror.

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I don't think he needs to threaten to shoot himself to get a room. I liked the story though


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