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As far as I can tell, the only thing Covid-related about this story is Brad's line "We still have a virus out there." And the plot and characters are soap-opera stock. This story would have worked better had Brad tried to knock off Harry in a Covid ICU.

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This read to me like a scene out of The Bold and The Beautiful, more soap opera than comedy or drama and not my cup of tea but it met the criteria.

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What this hospital needs is more sex and murder! Brad checks all the boxes for a really bad dude. Harry sure turned the tables, didn't he? Not sure I've seen something like that before. Some good moments. I did a fair amount of re-reading to get it all down.
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