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Posted: November 11th, 2008, 3:28pm Report to Moderator
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Hi Mike,

I liked this script.  Although the title doesn't quite sound right.

The 'X' mark was good, and the description of the fiend was interesting.

I can see how this fiend invades the town once a year and the parents believing this to be kids playing a hoax on them.

A nice read that sounds to me met the challenge.

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Mike,

This was an interesting story. The Fiend was kind of creepy, the whole very skinny, no distinguishable facial features, yeah....Though, the thing that kind of brought this script down was the dialogue...I don't know if you intended it on making it this way, but it didn't seem real, but then again, this is a young-adult horror, so, unless you intended it on making it that way...But it was kind of a creepy story, so I thought it was good.

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