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Don
Posted: August 21st, 2016, 6:18pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Star Wars Episode One: Castle Amidala by Andy Best - Sci Fi, Fantasy - Star Wars Episode One massive rewrite as if it was post buyout and most canon went to 'legends' and the prequels were never done.  120 pages - pdf, format


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I'll read this when I can. Did you read the Revenge of the Sith edit that's posted further down in this folder? That one was pretty good too! Although completely different from a total reimagining of the episode.

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Hey man. Thanks. If you get time to read it and feedback, let me know a script of yours I can read in return.

I'll check out the Revenge of the Sith script for sure. It's fascinating from the writers perspective because the Star Wars universe is rich, and the premise of the prequels is really good ... just the execution was off.

I did this towards my portfolio - movie spec or TV episode based on an existing property.


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I wrote Shadows Beyond which is posted just below this script.
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Andy Best
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On it.


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GregoryM
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I'm gonna do a live reading of this script on twitch later tonight. I'm excited. I love Star Wars.
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Awesome. I just got off work, Monday - Tuesday is my weekend, I'll get a review of yours up on its thread pronto.


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PM me. On your day off i can do a live read through of your script on twitch. Just me but it'd be fun!
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The story is really interesting. It would be interesting to see this film. I specially liked how the ending sets the series up for more sequels. Great job!
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Quoted from Don
Star Wars Episode One: Castle Amidala by Andy Best - Sci Fi, Fantasy - Star Wars Episode One massive rewrite as if it was post buyout and most canon went to 'legends' and the prequels were never done.  120 pages - pdf, format


Just so we clear, Jar Jar's not in it, right?


PRIDEFUL VISIONARY
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Just so we clear, Jar Jar's not in it, right?


lol
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Looking forward to reading this one. Episode 1 had some really odd choices that I don't understand why Lucas made. Anakin did not really need to have a virgin birth. And those Gunguns...


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