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dogglebe
Posted: November 11th, 2005, 8:51pm Report to Moderator
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Dogglebe, are you done with the Burnout or are you still working on it? I'm not quite finished yet, but I think I might have some suggestions.
Thanks for taking an interest, Al.


I'm done with it, Al, atleast for now.  I'd like to hear your feedback.


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I knew of the comic but I had never read it so I don't know if you're screenplay faithfully follows the storyline but I'm assuming that it does. I enjoyed your script. The retooling of the characters is unique. Trinity reminds me very much of the Else World comics by Dark Horse. Having only written one script myself (not very good I'm afraid!), I think your screenplay is well written and was an enjoyable read!

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