Veteran Vista by Jamie Parker (GravyBoatMan) - Action, Sci Fi - Set in a, not too, futuristic city, home to many different origins and races brought together in harmony and peace, the story follows the upbringing of a new master of evil and villainess acts. Starting from the childhood of one Roman Valentine, the story takes a rapid turn to darkness as the characters peaceful thoughts metamorphose into an evil voice of one Veteran. Though never witnessed in body form, Veterans emotions and evil are seen clearly throughout. Changing from bad to worse, Veterans influence soon becomes the father and mentor of Roman Valentine, which leads him to become hugely powerful in evil to aid the ultimate cause. 98 pages - doc, format

Just want to quickly mention that this script was written by much younger Jamie. I was about 16 when I began writing this. I just wanted to see what everyone elses thoughts were on this script because when I wrote it back then I was so chuffed with it and thought "if this script doesn't make it then I don't know what will!" Ha, I'm not sure what to think of it now though...

I would appreciate any feedback.   Thanks for reading.