I got about seven pages into this before I stopped. This is going to come off as rude, but I assure you I have the best intentions.
Even using Final Draft, your format is all kablooey. The title page is off, the second page -- which would be the first page of the script -- is completely empty save for "FADE IN" at the BOTTOM of the page. Spelling mistakes, only seven pages in, are more than I could keep track of and the dialogue was repetitive in several instances and too "on-the-nose."
I can't say what I think of the story so far, because I was far too distracted by the grammatical and format errors to pay attention.
My advice: go over your script from page one (including the title page) and rewrite it. Then rewrite it again. What the hell, rewrite it a third time for good measure. Only when you've eliminated ugly eye-sores and technical errors will a reader be able to focus on what your script is actually about: the story.
Good luck. Keep writing.