Absolution by Luis Lugo - Action - Gray confronts his own humanity when he fails to shoot a young female terrorist; the girl detonates a bomb in front of him, not only killing herself but bringing damage in the capital and undermining the unit's efficiency. Gray strikes up an ill-fated romance with Jess -- a terrorist and sister of the deceased, who he meets as she mourns her death. 96 pages - doc, format

Please let me know what you think story, character and format.
Let me know if the tank scene at the end is too much because i was deciding if I should change it to a sniper sequence.