Marriot,

Thanks for taking a looksie.  If you give me an email address, I would be happy to send you a copy of the pdf.

It's interesting because on this script in particular I have received such variance in comments as "The dialogue was my favorite part of the script" from a couple of people and "The dialogue is good in some places and cliche' in others" from a couple of others (and now you!).

However -- I think the rewrite after next is going to be a dialogue-focused rewrite.  NOw if I can just find time to get my head back into this sucker!

Chazz