hi don its ed the rainbow kingdom 307 people downloaded my screenplay only one person out of the 307 people said they could not read screenplay and you said you are going to take screenplay of the web site i do have problems with my grammar
as is evedent in this screenplay i just wanted feedback to see if it was a good concept or not if it was and people liked it i would have paid a gost writer to correct grammar etc thank for your time but i feel you  have made a wrong decision as only one person said they could not read the rainbow kingdom

Hi Ed.

The amount of views are for the threads... they do not mean that many people downloaded and read your script. Sometimes there are arguments in a thread and the "views" skyrocket. Like I said, it's views for the thread not the script...

Good luck with your script though.  

HI ME.

thanks for that one day when i sort out my grammar will post again

If you want to know if someone thinks an idea is a good concept or not, you don't need to write the whole script.  You can just explain the concept in a few short paragraphs and ask people for feedback.

thanks mcornetto for your advice when i get a bit more time i will post concept regards ed

Quoted from ed hi don its ed the rainbow kingdom 307 people downloaded my screenplay only one person out of the 307 people said they could not read screenplay and you said you are going to take screenplay of the web site i do have problems with my grammar as is evedent in this screenplay i just wanted feedback to see if it was a good concept or not if it was and people liked it i would have paid a gost writer to correct grammar etc thank for your time but i feel you  have made a wrong decision as only one person said they could not read the rainbow kingdom

Ed,

Your script was removed because, upon reading it, it appeared very much to me to be a joke.  Total disregard for grammar and no punctuation.  Quite simply, it if wasn't a joke, then your concept is totally lost upon the reader because they simply can't get through it.  

Please, in your future posts, use proper grammar and punctuation and capitalization, otherwise your posts will be deleted.   This is not a debatable matter.

Don
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