I liked this script a lot! The plot flowed nice and smoothly, and the relationship between Nick and Worley had a nice, honest feel to it.
When I was first introduced to Melissa and Vanessa, I thought they were going to play a more antagonistic role in the story. You know, like they want to preserve Worley's image for their agency, so they deliberately try to sabotage her & Nick so they won't get too close.
The characters were spot-on. Particularly Allie, and how she's caught up in mainstream pop culture and celebrity worship. That was a great conclusion where she's responsible for getting Nick and Worley to talk and work things out.
Anyway, I would give this a rewrite after so many years, and I could definitely see this made into a movie someday. Keep up the greta work.