Cursed by Earl Thompson (ecthommo) - Comedy - A woman who lost two boyfriends in similar accidents thinks that she is cursed. As a result she decided she was not going to fall in love with another man. Then she met Raheim who was a Christian. After Raheim survived a similar accident that had claimed both boyfriends, they decide they were going to get married. Would  marriage changed her luck, or was her present boyfriend heading for the same fate her previous boyfriends have had?    137 pages - pdf, format

got to about page 20 and had to bail. the dialogue is way too on the nose and there's no hook. i don't mind reading 137 pages but a script that long has to move forward quickly and constantly.