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Posted: March 26th, 2011, 7:33pm Report to Moderator
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Turbo Falcon Laser by Keenan Martens (kmart), Joel Laflamme, Nathan Hart - Comedy - 3 Guys try and break into the filmmaking industry by making their own movies.  Think Flight of the Concords only with movies.  Each episode contains a faux trailer for whatever movie that episode is based around. - html, format


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Turbo Falcon Laser.  Let me just say, that's an awesome title.  But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."

I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos.  Made reading this too hard.  Take a look, you'll see.  
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Turbo Falcon Laser.  Let me just say, that's an awesome title.  But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."

I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos.  Made reading this too hard.  Take a look, you'll see.  


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This had some funny parts to it.  The mac-10 is shakespear shit line.  The trailers (a bit long) but funny.  The squib joke and the braveheart vs. Apollo running gag.  The arms dealing gas station clerk also funny.

You have a comedic voice for writing.

Are you using final draft or what? Format was off.  Waaaay off.  With a lot of errors but I had patience to ignore it, most people wont and thats too bad because its a solid effort.

Also was this a 20-22 pg long script because it felt like it was reading long and would be way better if it was shorter.

I liked it though.
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Not only is it riddled with strange typos, it's written absolutely horrendously.

I don't know how or why anyone would read the entire script.

Back to the drawing board...


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