SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is July 15th, 2025, 4:22pm
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
The primary purpose of the SimplyScripts Discussion Board is the discussion of unproduced screenplays. If you are a producer or director lookng for your next project, the works here are available for option, purchase or production only if you receive permission from the author.

NOTE: these screenplays are NOT in the public domain and MAY NOT be used or reproduced for any purpose (including eductional purposes) without the expressed written permission of the author.

New to SimplyScripts? - Tell us about yourself! | How does this discussion board work? - FAQs! | Submit Your Script
The July 2025 One Week Challenge Theme is up!


Submit to SimplyScripts.com/OWC

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
Short Script of the Day | Featured Shorts Available for Production | Guidelines and Censorship | Produced Script Database | Oscar Winning Screenplays through the Ages | WGA Top 101 Screenplays

Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Unproduced Screenplay Discussion    Comedy Scripts  ›  Turbo Falcon Laser Moderators: bert
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 1 Guests

 Pages: 1
Recommend Print
  Author    Turbo Falcon Laser  (currently 1566 views)
Don
Posted: March 26th, 2011, 6:33pm Report to Moderator
Administrator
Administrator


So, what are you writing?

Location
Virginia
Posts
17402
Posts Per Day
1.95
Turbo Falcon Laser by Keenan Martens (kmart), Joel Laflamme, Nathan Hart - Comedy - 3 Guys try and break into the filmmaking industry by making their own movies.  Think Flight of the Concords only with movies.  Each episode contains a faux trailer for whatever movie that episode is based around. - html, format


Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site.

-------------
You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
- Wayne Gretzky
Logged Offline
Site Private Message
Ryan1
Posted: March 26th, 2011, 7:05pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer



Posts
1096
Posts Per Day
0.20
Turbo Falcon Laser.  Let me just say, that's an awesome title.  But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."

I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos.  Made reading this too hard.  Take a look, you'll see.  
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 1 - 4
Electric Dreamer
Posted: March 26th, 2011, 8:08pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Taking a long vacation from the holidays.

Location
Los Angeles
Posts
2739
Posts Per Day
0.50

Quoted from Ryan1
Turbo Falcon Laser.  Let me just say, that's an awesome title.  But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."

I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos.  Made reading this too hard.  Take a look, you'll see.  


Is that kinda like getting rickrolled by a script?

E.D.


LATEST NEWS

CineVita Films
is producing a short based on my new feature!

A list of my scripts can be found here.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 2 - 4
svsg1982
Posted: April 4th, 2011, 7:31am Report to Moderator
New


Posts
16
Posts Per Day
0.00
This had some funny parts to it.  The mac-10 is shakespear shit line.  The trailers (a bit long) but funny.  The squib joke and the braveheart vs. Apollo running gag.  The arms dealing gas station clerk also funny.

You have a comedic voice for writing.

Are you using final draft or what? Format was off.  Waaaay off.  With a lot of errors but I had patience to ignore it, most people wont and thats too bad because its a solid effort.

Also was this a 20-22 pg long script because it felt like it was reading long and would be way better if it was shorter.

I liked it though.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 3 - 4
Dreamscale
Posted: April 4th, 2011, 11:31am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


It's all about the rum

Location
Arizon
Posts
11726
Posts Per Day
115.80
Not only is it riddled with strange typos, it's written absolutely horrendously.

I don't know how or why anyone would read the entire script.

Back to the drawing board...
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 4 - 4
 Pages: 1
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    Comedy Scripts  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on
Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006