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Don
Posted: November 15th, 2019, 2:09pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Sisters by Iris Sobottke - Comedy - In this dark comedy, three estranged sisters reconnect and learn to work together when they find themselves involved in a night of manslaughter and body disposal. 115 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice


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Hi, Iris:

Page 1 is riddled with format and grammatical errors.

However, I only provide specific comments on scripts where the writer (a) responds to the comments made and (b) has already or intends to read scripts by others and offer them feedback.

Respond to this post and I will be happy to provide you details on the issues I see on page one and how to fix them.

Cheers.


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