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Strippers are People too. by O'Shea Wright - Drama - A man who is against woman taking their clothes off for money, struggles to bring a stripper to realize that she is worth more than the job she endures on a daily basis. But, the boss, he's not hearing that. 109 pages - pdf, format
production Audio version available on YouTube - pdf, format
O'Shea, just from the opening page - this needs a lot of work.
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Strippers are People too. Copyright (c) 2014. Written by O’Shea Wright.
Should be on the title page - not the first page of the script.
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FADE IN. INT - THE STRIP JOINT – MIDNIGHT.
Error in scene heading. Fade in should be on a separate line - need a period after INT.
From scrolling down, I could see many other errors in the scene headings.
The following action blocks are far too long, disorganized and written in passive voice.
I stopped.
So, you may have a great concept here - but you really need to do some research on script formatting, etc. You can do that by googling (e.g., how to write a scene heading) to looking at other scripts. But you simply are not ready in terms of structure. Hope this helps - best of luck.